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My name is Anna. I am 14 years young, in ninth grade, and I am currently living in the United States of America, I arrived on earth September 11th with brown hair that turned lighter into a blond color as I got older...(More)

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Owner: Victoria
Site Name: Soft Mist
Date Completed: 2/23/10

Site Name

I don't see anything wrong with the site name. It's easy to remember.


Site Validation

Uh-oh. You have 10 Errors and 15 Warnings in your HTML. You also have 31 errors in your CSS. Eeek, that is quite a lot for CSS.


Layout

I am really liking your layout. The notebook theme is very cool! I am a bit confused on who the whole layout is made by. You have CSS from Oh Gasp and various other places. Those "Various Other Places" MUST be listed on there as specific sites. You have to credit. I am assuming you made the notebook thing though since the layout is made by you. A few things I could suggest, make your layouts centered. I would like to see your layouts centered; your layouts look nice, but they could look better. I am not fond of the navigation placement at all. I is so hard to see, and it doesn't look appealing. It would be much better if the navigation was image-mapped accross the top of the layout. Another thing that I would like to point out is that, your underlined words are very hard to read because of the color you have chosen. You need to change that to a darker blue color. Overall, your layout is pretty.


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All Contests
I like how you involve your visitors so much. I think the "Design The Outfit" is a cute idea. :)

Avatars
Wow...I really like these. They are so well-made. BUT I am not liking the fact that you use celebrity images. Sure, we all secretly use them, but you seem to have a lot. It makes it look unoriginal.

Brushes
The brushes look really nice. These are good to have on your website.

Buttons
These are pretty good. The plain colored ones are a bit plain though. Pretty much everyone could make those.

Color Schemes
These are really plain colors. Three colors may not be enough for an entire layout. You should add more too.

Fonts
These are a nice resource to have on your site. It makes it easier to just find these than to search DaFont for them.

Nametags
These are really appealing, but the credit is way too big. It needs to be a smaller, less noticable font.

Pixels
Looking good to me. I don't find the envelopes very pixel-y though. They are really big. O_o

Stock Photos
Whoa! You draw really nicely. You have great skills; I like all of your stock. :)


Orginization

Your site is orginized well. I can get to everything without a problem.


Spelling and Grammar

I would just like to point out some stuff. Birthday: in August would make more sense if you just said Birthday: August. All of your items listed on your Owner page should be capatalized. EX: Food: Pizza and donuts not Food: pizza and donuts. Random Facts should be "Random Fact" seeing that you only have one fact. That is really the only serious writing on your site, so that is pretty much it.


Overall Comment

I enjoyed reviewing your site, Victoria. It had been nice to see you improve over time. I do like your layout, but I wish you had used more colors. I like how you have a lot of different types of content, but you don't have a lot of a type of content. If you add more to your site, you would have a more successful site. Good luck! Your score is: 3.5 out of 5.